the chart below shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five australian cities.
The given graph provides
analysis
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an analysis
about
people's Change preposition
of
coffee
and tea consuming
percentages in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart during 4 weeks.
Replace the word
consumption
Overall
, it can be seen that the proportion of customers who went to a cafe for tea or coffee
has maintained their rule while
the percentage
of fresh coffee
lovers showing some decrease over the period in question.
Looking at the details, in four cities, visiting cafe for a tea or coffee
was the famous
and the Correct quantifier usage
most famous
percentage
also
has not reduced by more than 50%. But in Adelaide, the situation has changed completely while
the percentage
of instant coffee
consumers has increased somewhat.
Further
, the fresh coffee
customers' percentage
has always showed
a Change the verb form
shown
low
rate during the given period than other Correct word choice
lower
coffee
consumer rates and it had the lowest percentage
not higher than the other two. Moreover
, the proportions
of people who choose instant Fix the agreement mistake
proportion
coffee
has remained stable between 40% and 55%Submitted by teenadissanayake906 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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