Some say you should always marry for love; other say that in an uncertain world it wiser to marry for money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Finding

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real

love

is one of the things people

are dreaming

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about,

however

, in an uncertain

world

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world,

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some argue that it is wiser to get married for

money

. In my opinion,

money

can't buy happiness and marriage should be created out of

love

.

This

essay will

further

develop both opinions. It is true, that coping with different economic problems that may arise in

the

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world filled with instability, is easier

together with

a partner.

Furthermore

, I do understand that with

money

comes

sense

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of security and economic stability

following

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by higher social status when marrying purely out of

money

. I do,

however

, strongly believe that it is not that easy to build trust or

deep

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and healthy relationship with a partner

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since all a person cares about is

money

. The one in a marriage with

higher

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income can be seen and valued purely based on his achievements.

This

can create

tention

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tension

and develop reasons to argue, which eventually lead to divorces.

Although

finding a romantic partner with whom to create a family is, indeed, very difficult, it can result in

happy

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and long-lasting relationship. When people

fell

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in

love

, they learn to communicate

to

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each other on a deeper level and

usually

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these kind

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of partners share

same

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values and goals for life.

Therefore

, in the

marriage

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marriage,

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there's

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fewer

misundertandings

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misunderstandings

and arguments, which

result

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in happier families. When it comes to

money

, at times it can be financially hard, but

having

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common goals, both working partners can deal with problems together and deepen their trust and respect for each other, when overcoming all the hardships they may face.

To conclude

,

although

some people choose

marrying

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to marry

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purely for

money

, which may create

sense

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of security, I do not believe

they

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these kind

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of marriages

last

for long. Finding someone with similar values in life and creating a family out of

love

results in happiness and long-lasting relationships.