Technological advancements have become increasingly popular over few decades. Some children are still playing in the park.
However
, some are changing to spend on advanced technological products. Linking Words
This
essay reveals the demerits outweigh the merits if young teenagers spend their leisure time with new technological devices.
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To begin
with, it is a lack of outdoor activities to causes health problems if Linking Words
students
are overusing the new "toys". Children can train their muscles to strengthen Use synonyms
the
body by running and jumping in the park. If teenagers seldom run outside, their bodies cannot keep fit which affects their growth. Change the word
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For example
, Linking Words
according to
university studies, pupils with obesity, who do not go to the park regularly, are commonly found in primary school. If so, Linking Words
students
are not willing to exercise in their leisure moments and make their health worse. The phoneme negatively impacts their young stage.
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On the other hand
, new technologies can help Linking Words
students
to have better exposure when they would like to have a deeper understanding of particular topics. Almost all electronic devices accessing the Internet are generic and Use synonyms
students
are able to search on the browser to seek dedicated knowledge. Use synonyms
For example
, young Linking Words
students
search the detailed information on the Great Wall in Beijing Use synonyms
such
as who built it and how long the Walls when they plan to visit the prominent building. The Linking Words
students
can recognise more easily when they visit.
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To sum up
, new products are not only bringing a lot of health issues but Linking Words
also
helping Linking Words
students
to have better learning. By common sense, the disadvantages of using new technological products outweigh the advantages.Use synonyms
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