The table and chart below give information on police budget

The table depicts the budget of British

police

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and the sources of money between 2017 and 2018

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the pie chart gives spending of the

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budget over the

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time. the figures are given in

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millions

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pound

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. It is apparent that the government

subsidies

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subsidised

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the

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the most in both 2 years,

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the salaries of officers and staff were the the largest proportion of spending. As the data shows, it can be seen that the

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department budget increased

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from

304.7 in 2017 to 318.6 in 2018, even though

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the national

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government paid the most from 175.5 in 2017 to 177.8 in 2018 but local taxes had a significant growth from 91.2 in 2017 to 102.3 in 2018. As the pie chart shows, the salaries were the highest cost which stayed at 75% in 2017

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decreased to 69% in 2018.

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.

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section had a

dramatical

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increase from 8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018. All in all, the

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and transport still

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same share which

were

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17% in both years.