. Should celebrities give up the right to privacy?
Nowadays,
an
entertainment industry is developing rapidly and credit goes to the Correct article usage
the
media
. Some people
believe that famous personalities is
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are
earing
based on Correct your spelling
earning
the
public Correct article usage
apply
spotlights
and they do not have Fix the agreement mistake
spotlight
right
to complain Correct article usage
the right
about
that the public is violating their Change preposition
apply
privacy
. Whereas
, my opinion contradicts the given statement. In the following paragraphs, the reason supporting my idea will be discussed in detail.
Apparently, According to
right
to act Correct article usage
the right
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conviction
convication
everyone has Add a comma
convication,
equal
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an equal
right
of
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to
privacy
and celebrities are not an exception here. Without the light of the stage they are also
a
normal Correct article usage
apply
people
like all of us and they have right
to enjoy their private life.Correct article usage
the right
As a
result
if they do not want to share their relationships or any other personal aspect of their lives Add a comma
result,
than
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then
people
need to respect their decision. For example
, when famous actress Anuska
Sharma shared Correct your spelling
Anushka
in
social Change preposition
on
media
that they are
not ready to make her baby's public appearance until she Wrong verb form
were
reaches
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reached
at
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a
certain
level of age.some Add an article
a certain
of
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apply
media
organisations had
supported them and respected their Unnecessary verb
apply
privacy
.
Other than this
, It is inevitable that social media
has a negative impact on a
famous Correct article usage
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people
. With the eye of Correct article usage
the paparazzi
paparazzi
they need to be very careful in the course of what they are doing, who they are meeting, who they are dating and even what they are eating which is totally unfair.Add a comma
paparazzi,
they
are not an animal in Capitalize word
They
zoo
and folks do not have Add an article
the zoo
a zoo
right
to control them. Morever
, they Correct your spelling
Moreover
spent
most of their time in Wrong verb form
spend
entertaining
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entertainment
as well
as
they are role models for many. They can be Correct word choice
and
streesed
by work just like us or even more. Correct your spelling
stressed
Therefore
, they deserved
to be happy with their loved ones on vacation or on weekends without any Wrong verb form
deserve
distraction
from Fix the agreement mistake
distractions
mass-
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mass media
media
.
In conclusion, It is normal to get an
attention Remove the article
apply
for
well-known personalities but they Change preposition
from
also
required
some Wrong verb form
require
along
time with their private lives without constant Correct your spelling
long
intriduing
by Correct your spelling
intervention
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the mass-media
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mass media
media
. If people
will respect their privacy
they would
be happy to live their life.Wrong verb form
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