The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012.

The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012.
The bar chart represents
a
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number of foreign students in four English-speaking
countries
in the years 2004 and 2012,
while
the tablet lists a
percentage
ratio of foreign students as a
percentage
of total student numbers in the country. Almost all
countries
witnessed an upward trend and increased the international student rate. The USA experienced a slight rise in terms of student quantity from approximately 175,000 to just above 250,000 respectively, despite it, anyway exceeding the remaining
countries
. The UK and Australia stood at nearly the same level – from a little more than 100 to almost 200 thousand,
to compare
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with each other in both years. Regarding Canada, it had about 40,000 overseas students in 2004,
nevertheless
just
stated
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stayed
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significantly below 100,000 after (over) the 8 years. As for
percentage
, it grew for all
countries
, the exception is the USA which showed the lowest results, holding constant at 2% of the total sum.
However
, the highest increase in
percentage
was made by Australia up to 2012 by 5%.
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