The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.

The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020.
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The chart illustrates the exotics coming from Qatar for various kinds of greens and herbs. From 1980-2020. Measured in
tons
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Overall
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it is clear that
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spinach was the most consumed item on the list,
while
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peas were the least preferred. As for the other three vegetables left, it seems like they fluctuated. The two highest herbs in the period given were spinach and garlic. As for spinach, it skyrocketed in 1980 with almost 500
tons
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, and it kept on rising until, in the
last
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year of 2020, garlic surpassed it and went down
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nearly 310
tons
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. In comparison, the lowest devoured vegetables were broccoli, peas, and ginger. As for broccoli, it debuted with under 200
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, and ginger debuted with around 240
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. Until both broccoli and ginger peaked in the
last
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year to reach almost 300,250, respectively.
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While peas
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started with nearly 170
tons
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and almost stayed the same in the
last
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year to reach 185
tons
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or so.
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