The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2006 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two
map
give information about the development of a university Change to a plural noun
maps
campus
from 2006 to the present. Generally, Use synonyms
it is clear that
the Linking Words
campus
areas have Use synonyms
been
experienced major changes. Most noticeably, there were increases in accommodation.
Unnecessary verb
apply
To begin
with, the student accommodation which is located in the west of the Linking Words
campus
has been expanded with more buildings. Use synonyms
In addition
, shops and restaurant which were in the South-Eastern corner of the map have moved to the South-Western corner of the Linking Words
campus
and has been made into student facilities which include shops, offices and more. Use synonyms
Then
, the accommodation building which Linking Words
locate
to the South-Western of the lake has been relocated into the South-Western and has occupied two shops and Wrong verb form
is located
the
restaurant.
Correct article usage
a
On the other hand
, the lawn and seating area which located be located around the lake Linking Words
has been
no longer there and more trees have been chopped down for more free land. Wrong verb form
are
Moreover
, the teaching block which teaches science and arts has been separated into two Linking Words
building
Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
such
as Linking Words
arts
building and Correct article usage
the arts
science
building. Specifically, the university offices Correct article usage
the science
has
been knocked down and Change the verb form
have
has been
converted into M: Verb problem
apply
the
science building and the old teaching block Correct word choice
and the
has
been turned into knocked down to make way for Correct subject-verb agreement
have
arts
building.Correct article usage
the arts
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Vocabulary: Replace the words campus with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "knocked down" was used 2 times.
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