many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes in the world. to what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism?what changes would you like to be made in the new century?

the advent of globalisation

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capabilities of

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the computer

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computer

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and the internet

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one optimistic about bringing positive changes in the world in the

21century

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21st century

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serious problems like energy shortage ,pollution,global warming and the threat of war are looming large over humanity,internationalisation and greater understanding among the

nations

can bring about a bright

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future

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some of the desirable changes which

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wish to happen in the new century.

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with,globalisation has paved the way for global improvements.to cite an

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,trade and commerce among

nations

have improved

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there has been

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economic boom in many developing

nations

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breakthroughs

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in science and technology,

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like the computer and the internet,make humans hopeful of attaining greater heights of progress and prosperity.growing international

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cooperation

can resolve the maladies facing the world now. to continue,apart from major issues like power,pollution,and war, there are areas of concern which need urgent attention.

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instance,there are

nations

which are still experiencing

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starvation

to death. millions do not even get drinking water.

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are in the midst of affluence

elsewhere

.the ever-increasing number of vehicles on roads not only creates pollution

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but accidents and loss of lives are innumerable.these issues should be addressed immediately

to conclude

,globalisation and development in science and technology give

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of

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a bright

21century

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21st century

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,the challenges in store for mankind in the days to come are quite a lot. poverty and road traffic calamities.

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are two areas where

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want to see positive changes by taking taking remedial

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measures

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at the earliest.