People are living in a “throwaway society”, using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?

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Nowadays, folk don'

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value their things anymore. There are many factors that played a role in developing

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behaviour that I will explain thoroughly during

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the negative outcomes. The

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, and foremost reason is that with the industrial revolution,

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have more accessibility to

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a wider range of prices than before,

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, one can buy clothes or devices online in no time with minimal costs, which has led to community not valuing the product that they have bought.

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, social media trends, which I believe have a huge influence on many of us, people can easily be affected by internet bloggers to buy items that they don'

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need just to follow the trend,

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, when the trend ends they throw it away. Not only but

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, mass production and low fees industries have invaded the globe, where they provide low prices for poor quality

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that won'

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have the ability to sustain for a long period. Unfortunately,

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behavior has a devastating influence on many aspects,

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for our youth which affects their personality where we will have a generation that doesn'

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value money.

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, we will have waste

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that won'

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be recycled properly, impacting Mother Earth poorly. Eventually, we will be encouraging big organizations and companies to keep on abusing low-fee employees.

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, the throwaway attitude has evolved greatly in our society because of the availability of various low-cost

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and we should prohibit

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action so we can have a better future for our children who can value and preserve our planet.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

264 words

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People are living in a “throwaway society”, using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?

Fully explain your ideas

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You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include : &Where you stayed. & What the problems were. & How they can fix your complaints.