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The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020. The pie charts depict the total value of imports in Qatar for five varieties of vegetables for 3 distinct years from 1980 to 2020. Units are denoted in tones.

The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020. The pie charts depict the total value of imports in Qatar for five varieties of vegetables for 3 distinct years from 1980 to 2020. Units are denoted in tones.
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The presented pie charts refer to all vegetable imports in
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Qatari, which include
Spinach
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, Broccoli, Garlic, Peas, and Ginger vegetables from 1980 to 2020.
Overall
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, the
Spinach
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 has the
most
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 levels of imports among others.
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 the peas devoted
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less amount of that treat. Indeed, the popular and
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 vegetable was the
Spinach
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 for individuals’ Qatari. As observed in the details, it is said that
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 of the
Spinach
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 reduced approximately 150
tonnes
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 in 2020.
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, the import of
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Garlic had a
raise
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about
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 100
tonnes
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 from 1980 to 2020.
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,
in
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the case of Broccoli showed the same trend.
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, Peas’s imports did not
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 change during the mentioned years, and it took the lower level in
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 survey, which was below 200
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. The Ginger had a mean and stable amount
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 others and it entered about 300
tonnes
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 on a yearly basis.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words spinach, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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