the table shows the proportions of pupil attending four secondary school types

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four second-degree school categories in a country from 2000 to 2009.

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, the attendance

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of specialist

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was the

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by far in the period of nine years.

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community

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exhibited an upward trend, the remaining three

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decreased over time. Eventually, voluntary-controlled

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experienced the most significant drop throughout the period. Community and specialist

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of 12% in 2000. After that specialist

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demonstrated only a slight drop of 2%

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until

2009.

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, community

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increased to 32% before escalating to 58% in 2009. Which was the highest join

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of lectures for a school type from 2000 to 2009.

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had

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% attendance

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half of

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of voluntary-controlled

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attended their classes in 2000. After that it saw a

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drop of 14%, before hitting the bottom of 20% in 2009. The

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entrance

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of classes for

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slowly decreased to 12%

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of 2009.