You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there. In your letter: Thank your friend Describe your watch Tell them what you want them to do

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Dear Amanda, How are you? I hope my letter reaches you quickly and unharmed.

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Sunday's celebration was amazing. Actually, it is not difficult for you to have

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holidays and I

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that your holiday will be wonderful. I am very grateful to you for

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, you helped me to increase my number of friends. Especially desserts and pool. The songs played on the speakers by the pool are so great and the dancing makes me wonder how the time has passed. My friend, I have a request for you. I was so engrossed in the fun that I didn't even notice that I had lost my watch at home. I can't remember exactly where it is.

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watch is precious to me. Because it was a gift from my father. I would greatly appreciate it if you could look for my watch in your house. Thank you in advance for trying to find it and sending it to me. You are the best. Best regards, Sevinch

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

170 words

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You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there. In your letter: Thank your friend Describe your watch Tell them what you want them to do

deforestatrion caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem ?

Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

Some people regard video games as useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?