You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there. In your letter: Thank your friend Describe your watch Tell them what you want them to do

#friend’s #house #weekend #friend

Dear Amanda, How are you? I hope my letter reaches you quickly and unharmed.

Last

Sunday's celebration was amazing. Actually, it is not difficult for you to have

such

holidays and I

believed

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believe

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that your holiday will be wonderful. I am very grateful to you for

this

In addition

, you helped me to increase my number of friends. Especially desserts and pool. The songs played on the speakers by the pool are so great and the dancing makes me wonder how the time has passed. My friend, I have a request for you. I was so engrossed in the fun that I didn't even notice that I had lost my watch at home. I can't remember exactly where it is.

This

watch is precious to me. Because it was a gift from my father. I would greatly appreciate it if you could look for my watch in your house. Thank you in advance for trying to find it and sending it to me. You are the best. Best regards, Sevinch

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9 paragraphs

170 words

6.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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