The maps below represent the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
The maps below represent the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
In 1990, the town was a much greener residential area with immeasurable trees and individual houses,
Linking Words
however
during the next 15 Add a comma
however,
years
Templeton experienced tragic changes. The most apparent is that nineteen woods Add a comma
years,
chopped
down to three. Specific houses by the seaside had Add a missing verb
were chopped
replaced
by Add a missing verb
been replaced
block houses
and several ones were cut down to construct a railway station. Correct your spelling
blockhouses
Moreover
, a new industrial estate with Linking Words
factory
and supermarket sprang up around the school, hospital, airport and Correct article usage
a factory
the
railway station.
Correct article usage
apply
Although
, Linking Words
further
developments were the manufacture of the airport near the Linking Words
north-east
. A new stretch of railway from the seaside Correct your spelling
northeast
running
directly west. The latest thing, a ferry was Wrong verb form
runs
also
established at the mouth of the sea.
Linking Words
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from a largely rural to a mainly metropolis.Linking Words
Submitted by dnm.best on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "represent" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼