In marriages today, some argue that it is the rosponsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is clear that

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these days

people

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who get married

both

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apply

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mostly have jobs socially. And some

people

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argue that it is reasonable for them to take the responsibility to make money.

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this

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argument can be

convertiable

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convertible

To begin

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with, it depends on what

people

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want to do, working at

home

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or outside. In the past, in a family, women

cook

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cooked

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meals for their

family

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families

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clean

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cleaned

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the

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room, and

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did

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the

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laundry. Men work out of the

home

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and earn money. It was

natural

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a natural

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thing which every family did. If you claim that women must stay at

home

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, you will be so

blaimed

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blamed

claimed

. But today,

people

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are finding their altitude, which means they choose

their

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the

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job that they want.

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, both spouses will decide what to do; stay at

home

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or work outside.

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, there is

also

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a possibility that

husband

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the husband

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does chores and

wife

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the wife

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earns money. It is not the problem of responsibility, it is about what

people

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would like to do for their family.

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up,

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with

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apply

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, they need not have responsibility. It is about

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the altitude

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altitude

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attitude

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to work inside or outside.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction
Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

187 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

marriages
responsibility
earn a living
families
spouses
financial contributions
equality
financial independence
freedom
choices
division of responsibility
burden
share responsibilities
work-life balance
relationships

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