Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Approximately, there are around 300 countries around the globe. It is clearly seen that many countries invest in their people. On the one hand, some of them provide advantages of physical activities to every individual and
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, other countries who are not developed enough make them limited to their top athletes and in my viewpoint, it is a negative development. I discussed both points below.
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to make the community healthy and fit. The developing states take initiation by providing top-notch game spaces to their every individual by building gyms, stadiums, and indoor courts for indoor games i.e., Badminton, Table Tennis, and many more. They make these benefits free for their people. So that everyone can utilize them as feasible as they are and the government bear all the expenses by itself and all these steps taken by the developed kingdom as they have enough budget to bear all the expenditures.
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, In the United States gyms do not cost individuals. A healthy group makes a home healthy.
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, the states that are suffering from poverty are likely to provide the facilities only to the top player and all
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happens because they do not have enough account for physical exercise.
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, nations like Pakistan does not have free gymnasium, not even a stadium no zero cost. The group of people must pay the company as all the available sports clubs are private. All the facilities are only for the top professional and their family and all the individual who comes to any sports do so just because their ancestors played for Pakistan. Because the individuals cannot be able to pay for the stadium fees. To support
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saying, the average of the persons in Pakistan is 50, because they do not live a healthy life which leads to negative circumstances especially for their health and for society as well.
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the above statements, the rich homeland supports its audience to adopt a healthy lifestyle by providing them with basic necessities for their physical health.
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, by providing
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necessities they wanted to find the top professional among their audience. The other homelands do not have enough total they just put the approved cost on the existing top competitor as they have limited resources and a limited amount of money.
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, climate makes the community healthy, if the group is not healthy
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the environment is not healthy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • specialised facilities
  • train top athletes
  • international sports
  • boost
  • reputation
  • attract
  • sporting events
  • access
  • general public
  • inequality
  • opportunities
  • overemphasis
  • elite sports
  • neglect
  • grassroots development
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