the diagram below shows how a refrigerator works.
The process diagram illustrates the way in which a refrigerator functions.
Overall
, the given process is a cyclical one, in which the heat from food within the refrigerator travels through a tube
and then
,the heat is transferred to the atmosphere.
Firstly
, the heat from food within the refrigerator is introduced into a big tube
and ,after that, the warm low-pressure vapour is transported through that tube
until it reaches the compressor. The compressor transforms the gas from one that is
low pressure to one that is
high pressure, but it keeps it warm.
Next,
the warmth from the hot high-pressure vapour is transferred to the atmosphere and the gas continues to travel through a winding-shaped condenser in order to be transformed from a vapour to a high-pressure liquid. Finally
, this
liquid goes into a high-pressure liquid evaporator and is transferred into a capillary small tube
. Additionally
, the process repeats.Submitted by zaineajessica on
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