In marriages today, some argue that it is the rosponsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the
last
few decades, there has been a huge change in marriages to stay happy. Few folks believe that the responsibilities of earning should be divided between partners, Linking Words
while
others are opposed to it. Linking Words
However
, I strongly agree with the given statement Linking Words
due to
several possible reasons Linking Words
such
as the financial crisis and the following paragraphs will expatiate both stances with lucid examples.
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To begin
with, the foremost reason to agree is to help each other in daily revenues. To explain Linking Words
further
, in Linking Words
this
expensive world, there is no doubt that it is next to impossible for a single spouse to handle all expenses on their own because of high taxes on items Linking Words
such
as groceries. To exemplify, a lot of partners are working full-time to stay financially stable, especially in developing countries like Canada, England etc. Linking Words
In addition
, working alone in a family is not only hard to make money but Linking Words
also
for health. Linking Words
This
means that the husband or wife has to efforts to fulfil the basic needs of the family Linking Words
such
as rent, bills etc. which ultimately affect his/her health Linking Words
such
as stress, depression etc. Linking Words
Thus
, it is one of the best ideas to share responsibilities together to run a happy life.
On the other side, the first significant reason to disagree is work-life balance which means both spouses are not able to differentiate between job and personal life. Linking Words
This
is mainly Linking Words
due to
no time for each other. Linking Words
According to
American studies, 80% reason of divorces is because of no time for each other worldwide. Linking Words
Secondly
, it is not only bad for them but Linking Words
also
for their children as they feel alone at home. Linking Words
This
scenario makes children anti-social, depressive etc. Linking Words
For example
, in developed countries, half of the teenagers are suffering from anti-social behaviour because they have a habit of staying alone. Linking Words
Thus
, Linking Words
this
argument affects parents Linking Words
as well as
kids.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that sharing the living cost with companions has some negative impacts Linking Words
such
as inclined in divorce rates, and children's mental health, Linking Words
besides
that it has more positives Linking Words
such
as sharing stress with each other, and financial stability. Linking Words
However
, they should discuss with each other including house chores before joining the endeavor.Linking Words
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