Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others say this is the only way to save such traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people believe that cultural
traditions
will disappear if they are used for money-making purposes,
while
others believe
this
is the only
way
to preserve
such
traditions
. Personally, I agree that charging for cultural
traditions
is an effective
way
to maintain the cultural heritage but it is not the only solution. On the one hand, there is a reason why charging for
traditions
and cultural heritage can lead to the loss of local
traditions
and customs. Cultural
traditions
are priceless and turning these
traditions
into tourism purposes seems to reduce the preciousness of local
traditions
.
For example
, there are some temples that are supposed to be sacred places because they connect the gods and ordinary people are turning to famous tourist attractions and visitors have to pay entrance ticket fees to get into them.
This
inevitably makes the religious and sacred destinations mundane places like any other tourist destination,
thus
visitors do not comprehensively understand the meaning and importance of
such
traditions
.
As a result
, these religious
traditions
will soon be eliminated.
On the other hand
, I believe charging for cultural
traditions
can be an effective
way
to maintain
such
traditions
.
This
is because there are some
traditions
that require a huge amount of money to maintain.
For instance
, jugglery is a Vietnamese cultural heritage that requires the frequent replacement of equipment, and
therefore
once jugglery does not receive financial resources, it can disappear.
However
, I believe there are numerous ways out there to maintain cultural
traditions
, one of which is financial assistance from the government. If governments allocate part of the state budget to provide equipment and upgrade traditional facilities, not only are culture and
traditions
preserved but
also
a huge influx of tourists are attracted to the country,
therefore
boosting the country’s economy. In conclusion,
while
traditions
can be destroyed if they are used for money-making purposes, I believe it can be a great
way
to preserve cultural
traditions
because some
traditions
need financial resources to maintain.
However
,
this
is not the only
way
to maintain traditional values as the government can
also
take responsibility by providing financial assistance.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Commercialization
  • Dilution of cultural traditions
  • Authenticity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Revenue
  • Financial support
  • Preservation
  • Promotion
  • Commodification of culture
  • Intrinsic value
  • Exposure
  • Global awareness
  • Respect and understanding
  • Economic gain
  • Local communities
  • Decision-making processes
  • Respectful portrayal
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