Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others say this is the only way to save such traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some people believe that cultural
traditions
will disappear if they are used for money-making purposes, Use synonyms
while
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way
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traditions
. Personally, I agree that charging for cultural Use synonyms
traditions
is an effective Use synonyms
way
to maintain the cultural heritage but it is not the only solution.
On the one hand, there is a reason why charging for Use synonyms
traditions
and cultural heritage can lead to the loss of local Use synonyms
traditions
and customs. Cultural Use synonyms
traditions
are priceless and turning these Use synonyms
traditions
into tourism purposes seems to reduce the preciousness of local Use synonyms
traditions
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For example
, there are some temples that are supposed to be sacred places because they connect the gods and ordinary people are turning to famous tourist attractions and visitors have to pay entrance ticket fees to get into them. Linking Words
This
inevitably makes the religious and sacred destinations mundane places like any other tourist destination, Linking Words
thus
visitors do not comprehensively understand the meaning and importance of Linking Words
such
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traditions
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As a result
, these religious Linking Words
traditions
will soon be eliminated.
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On the other hand
, I believe charging for cultural Linking Words
traditions
can be an effective Use synonyms
way
to maintain Use synonyms
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traditions
. Use synonyms
This
is because there are some Linking Words
traditions
that require a huge amount of money to maintain. Use synonyms
For instance
, jugglery is a Vietnamese cultural heritage that requires the frequent replacement of equipment, and Linking Words
therefore
once jugglery does not receive financial resources, it can disappear. Linking Words
However
, I believe there are numerous ways out there to maintain cultural Linking Words
traditions
, one of which is financial assistance from the government. If governments allocate part of the state budget to provide equipment and upgrade traditional facilities, not only are culture and Use synonyms
traditions
preserved but Use synonyms
also
a huge influx of tourists are attracted to the country, Linking Words
therefore
boosting the country’s economy.
In conclusion, Linking Words
while
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traditions
can be destroyed if they are used for money-making purposes, I believe it can be a great Use synonyms
way
to preserve cultural Use synonyms
traditions
because some Use synonyms
traditions
need financial resources to maintain. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
is not the only Linking Words
way
to maintain traditional values as the government can Use synonyms
also
take responsibility by providing financial assistance.Linking Words
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