The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and2022

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and2022
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The bar chart illustrates the number of residents of Iceland by
age
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groups
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from 1990 to 2020. Viewing from an
overall
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perspective, it is clearly evident that across all
age
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groups, the
amount
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of people between 25-54
years
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old was dominant compared to others .
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, those who were over 55
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old were low throughout the observation period, except in 2020 in which the
age
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group of 15-24 was the lowest. Looking in more detail, those who were aged 25-54 comprised just over 30% in the first year, and it increased steadily over 30
years
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until it reached its peak in 2020 at slightly below 50%, remaining as the highest contributor of the total population.
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, the number of residents who
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above 55
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old remained stable, which was considerably low, and only changed by merely about 5%. People who were in the
age
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groups of 0-14 and 15-24 were major contributors in the earlier period, totalling more than a half of the total population, but, they decreased gradually each 10
years
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until they hit the bottom in 2020, which were slightly below 20% for the
age
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group of 0-14 and marginally below 10% for the
age
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group of 15-24, becoming the lowest proportion of the total population.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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