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We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent does advertising influence our choices as consumers and what effect does it have on our lifestyle? Discuss this issue and give your opinion.

#world #influence #choices #consumers #effect #lifestyle
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Nowadays, success is defined as the
people
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 who can make more
money
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due to
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life
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 fulfilment. others say that
people
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 who contribute to
society
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 would be more valuable in
life
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. There are both perspectives that I will elaborate more on below. On the one hand,
people
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 who can make more
money
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 are able to
fulfill
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 their needs. Many purposes of
life
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 would be realized by more spending
money
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,
such
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 as education and health. These are important aspects for
people
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 to have a better
life
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.
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, Parents who send their children to excellent schools and private courses will generate a competitive individual in the future.
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, Having regular health treatment could be
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beneficial for their body and prevent them from getting serious diseases;
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, they are happier to run their
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.
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, contribution to
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 is more priority than having a lucrative salary. When
people
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 dedicate their lives to having a positive impact on
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, they have been being successful. It is because those
people
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 are not only thinking about themselves but
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 have a desire to give a sense of hope.
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, in remote areas, some teachers are struggling to educate
people
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 in the class
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 they are paid low for the profession.
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,
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 moment gives hope to the families who send their children to study for a better
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. In conclusion, having a lot of
money
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 can provide
people
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 with many opportunities in
life
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.
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, the important indicator is about how much positive impact to
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 that
people
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 can bring to create an awareness towards
society
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.
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