Countries should restrict foreign companies from opening offices and factories in order to protect local businesses. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
In
this
modern era, Local businesses should be prioritized to increase value
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the value
products
in country
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the country
This
approach must be followed by restricting companies
from other countries to advance their products
in
there. I personally agree that giving more space for local Change preposition
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companies
would generate more opportunity
to attract consumers Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
due to
the
more exposure Correct article usage
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of
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to
the
local Correct article usage
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products
. In this
essay, I will elaborate more on below.
On the one hand, some businesses lost
their income from the local consumers Wrong verb form
lose
due to
the competitors that is
usually foreign companies
. They attempt to provide more attractive products
that are affordable price as a strategy; therefore
, the local products
lost
the market which impacts Wrong verb form
lose
on
their revenue. If Change preposition
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such
competitors are openly given an opportunity in the country, the local brand would be neglected from
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also
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a
significant drawbacks for the Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
enterpreneurs
that want to start or expand their businesses in the country.
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entrepreneurs
On the other hand
, opening a space for foreign companies
could encourage innovations of
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product
. It is because the Fix the agreement mistake
products
companies
would come with
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thus
, it would be a spirit for local companies
to make more competitive products
. Not only about the innovations but the collaboration could be created among the companies
to generate a fresh product to be marketed wider. In this
case, people can be exposed with
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products
.
In conclusion, strategy
to restrict Correct article usage
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the
foreign Correct article usage
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companies
would be a solution of
encouraging local Change preposition
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products
. However
, it seems to me that collaborative
aspect should be considered to increase the value of the Correct article usage
the collaborative
products
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