Countries should restrict foreign companies from opening offices and factories in order to protect local businesses. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

In
this
modern era, Local businesses should be prioritized to increase
value
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the value
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of local
products
in
country
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the country
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.
This
approach must be followed by restricting
companies
from other countries to advance their
products
in
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there. I personally agree that giving more space for local
companies
would generate more
opportunity
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opportunities
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to attract consumers
due to
the
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more exposure
of
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the
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local
products
. In
this
essay, I will elaborate more on below. On the one hand, some businesses
lost
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their income from the local consumers
due to
the competitors
that is
usually foreign
companies
. They attempt to provide more attractive
products
that are affordable price as a strategy;
therefore
, the local
products
lost
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the market which impacts
on
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their revenue. If
such
competitors are openly given an opportunity in the country, the local brand would be neglected
from
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the local people.
This
also
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significant drawbacks for the
enterpreneurs
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entrepreneurs
that want to start or expand their businesses in the country.
On the other hand
, opening a space for foreign
companies
could encourage innovations
of
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product
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products
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. It is because the
companies
would come
with
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a new idea;
thus
, it would be a spirit for local
companies
to make more competitive
products
. Not only about the innovations but the collaboration could be created among the
companies
to generate a fresh product to be marketed wider. In
this
case, people can be exposed
with
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varied
products
. In conclusion,
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to restrict
the
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foreign
companies
would be a solution
of
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encouraging local
products
.
However
, it seems to me that
collaborative
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the collaborative
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aspect should be considered to increase the value of the
products
.
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