Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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have to be accustomed to

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their personal matters and being decisive, others contend that adopting

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approach will bring about

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egoistic

generations

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society.

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scrutinizethe

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scrutinize the

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both opposing views and the argument is in favour of the former view.

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with, the concept of allowing

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with their entire liberty without limitation is considered a detrimental approach.

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,

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children

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are not mature enough to distinguish what is convenient for them, it is essential to boost them mentally and accompany them at

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early

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stage

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.

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some

children

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always to acquire whatever they like, they adopt deviant behaviour

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as crying and screaming to satisfy their desires, as a

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to

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pressure upon

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and

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obey

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request

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.

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is

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, in turn, gives rise to

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a distorted individual

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the community.

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the other hand, it is acknowledged that

parents

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have to reinforce their offspring, offering them to express their

opinion

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opinions

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,

exchanging

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thoughts,

opting

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their needs and

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helping

them to make decisions. Albeit, all that should be with

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constructive approach, which

impacting

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on their character positively. It has been proven that restricting

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and exposing them to

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sway

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overly,

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to personality disorders

such

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as a lack of confidence and frequent hesitation.

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,

children

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who make their own decision and express

politly

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politely

their viewpoints about personal matters,

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this

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apply

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strengthen

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their traits.

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,

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have to

perfoma

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perform

perform a

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constructive

appoach

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approach

for better mental well-being.

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there is a dominant notion of allowing

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children

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to do whatever they like excessively and without regular mentoring and family supervision, I believe that

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have to interact positively with them and undertake flexible approaches.