14.The two pie charts show how different industries used electricity in 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

14.The two pie charts show how different industries used electricity in 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts below display the proportion of electricity that
manufacturing
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the manufacturing
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, fishery, household, service and food industries produced in the years 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, manufacturing had the biggest market share in both years. Fishery and food will continue to be significant but with a
steadily
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steady
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decline, but all others will increase sharply. In 1995 manufacturing had a third of the
overall
share and
this
will remain the biggest industry in using electric power with only
2
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a 2
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% drop. The next biggest is the food, with nearly a fifth of the portion,
this
fell slightly to 21% in 2005. Fishery is set to become the biggest loser with a loss of 7% from 20% to 13%. Household industries had a proportion of 15% in 1995, and
this
is set to increase to a fifth of the total in 2005.
While
the service industry used
the
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apply
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electricity the least in 1995, with only 8%
but
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this
nearly doubled in 2005 to 15%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • industries
  • electricity usage
  • 1995
  • 2005
  • comparison
  • increase
  • decrease
  • service sector
  • manufacturing sector
  • residential sector
  • agricultural sector
  • main features
  • summarize
  • reporting
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