14.The two pie charts show how different industries used electricity in 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts below display the proportion of electricity that
manufacturing
, fishery, household, service and food industries produced in the years 1995 and 2005.
Correct article usage
the manufacturing
Overall
, manufacturing had the biggest market share in both years. Fishery and food will continue to be significant but with a steadily
decline, but all others will increase sharply.
In 1995 manufacturing had a third of the Change the adverb
steady
overall
share and this
will remain the biggest industry in using electric power with only 2
% drop. The next biggest is the food, with nearly a fifth of the portion, Correct article usage
a 2
this
fell slightly to 21% in 2005. Fishery is set to become the biggest loser with a loss of 7% from 20% to 13%.
Household industries had a proportion of 15% in 1995, and this
is set to increase to a fifth of the total in 2005. While
the service industry used the
electricity the least in 1995, with only 8% Correct article usage
apply
but
Correct word choice
apply
this
nearly doubled in 2005 to 15%.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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