17.The charts below show the number of reasons why some people leave UK and why some people choose to stay. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts display the five aim why individuals
will
prefer to stay or leave Wrong verb form
would
the
Great Britain.
Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, quality of life is the biggest reason why Linking Words
people
would choose to stay or leave in Use synonyms
United
Kingdom. The Correct article usage
the United
weather
and financial resources had a great difference in both charts, Use synonyms
while
the others are relatively similar.
The biggest reason why Linking Words
people
wanted to leave Use synonyms
UK
is because of the quality of life, with just above one-third of the Correct article usage
the UK
overall
share. The next biggest cause is the Linking Words
weather
, with 22%, Use synonyms
moreover
, financial resources had just 2% less than the Linking Words
weather
. Use synonyms
Employement
and Correct your spelling
Employment
join
family and friends had the least proportions, with 15% and 9% respectively.
Wrong verb form
joining
On the other hand
, 40% of Linking Words
people
wanted to stay in the United Kingdom because of the quality of life. Almost one-third of individuals would stay in the country because of financial resources. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, employment only occupied 13% of the proportion, and the reasons Linking Words
of join
family and friends, and Change preposition
for joining
weather
are the biggest losers with only 10% and 7% of Use synonyms
people
respectively taking them as the reason of why they would stay.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, weather with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 5 times.
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