Task 1: The diagram below shows one method of manufacturing ceramic pots.

Task 1: The diagram below shows one method of manufacturing ceramic pots.
The diagram describes the
process
of manufacturing ceramic
pots
. Generally, the
process
consists of 11 stages in the
process
, beginning with a collection of raw materials, and ending with finished
pots
.
At the first stage
in the manufacturing of ceramic
pots
, raw materials are dug out of the ground by a digger and
then
delivered to the factory by a truck. At the factory, organic materials are crushed by a special machine into power which is
then
mixed with water. Afterwards, the mixture is poured into the moulds that have a pre-formed shape of
pots
and left there for four to six hours to die before being created into assembled clay
pots
. At the next stage of the
process
, clay
pots
are created in the previous stage and are placed in an oven where they are heated at temperatures of 1.000 degrees Celsius.
Subsequently
, these are curled and laid into colour colour-firing oven before finished
pots
, ready to be sold.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, pots with synonyms.
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