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Socail media is gradually repalcaing in person face to face coontact with many people worldwide.Do the benefits of social media outweight the disadvantage?

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It is believed that online communications are used more widely than personal meetings all around the world.
This
 essay will
firstly
 demonstrate that social media can not fully replace
face to
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face
 contact
due to
unavailability
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the unavailability
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 of addressing sensitive feelings through the device and
presence
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the presence
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 of distractions, followed by an advantage in
opportunity
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the opportunity
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 to interact with
people
 all over the world. Nowadays, social apps,
such
 as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter provide us with new connections and
people
 from different parts of the Earth.
Moreover
,
people
 are able to call their relatives or friends, who live far from their homes, and do not lose close relationships with them. My mother misses my brother, who is living overseas, and they have a long WhatsApp call for almost an hour a day.
This
 practice makes her life easier.
However
,
people
 will always have a need in personal meetings because the devices can not transfer your senses and the opponent is not able to support you.
Furthermore
, human beings have been based on
face to
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face
 interaction since Ancient times. In a previously mentioned example with my mother, online calls can not replace
real life
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 meetings and talks. They need to feel the presence of the person and have physical contact.
Moreover
, during online voice calls there are distractors, namely, bad internet connection, quality of sounds and video etcetera. During the Covid-19, our school changed the format of education to
the
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 online platform and the quality of information has deteriorated
due to
 devices and occasional internet outages.
To conclude
, the availability of sensitive and physical interaction via
face to
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face
 interactions outweighs the opportunity to talk with overseas friends.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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