Socail media is gradually repalcaing in person face to face coontact with many people worldwide.Do the benefits of social media outweight the disadvantage?
It is believed that online communications are used more widely than personal meetings all around the world.
This
essay will firstly
demonstrate that social media can not fully replace face to
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face-to-face
face
contact due to
unavailability
of addressing sensitive feelings through the device and Correct article usage
the unavailability
presence
of distractions, followed by an advantage in Correct article usage
the presence
opportunity
to interact with Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
people
all over the world.
Nowadays, social apps, such
as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter provide us with new connections and people
from different parts of the Earth. Moreover
, people
are able to call their relatives or friends, who live far from their homes, and do not lose close relationships with them. My mother misses my brother, who is living overseas, and they have a long WhatsApp call for almost an hour a day. This
practice makes her life easier.
However
, people
will always have a need in personal meetings because the devices can not transfer your senses and the opponent is not able to support you. Furthermore
, human beings have been based on face to
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face-to-face
face
interaction since Ancient times. In a previously mentioned example with my mother, online calls can not replace real life
meetings and talks. They need to feel the presence of the person and have physical contact. Add a hyphen
real-life
Moreover
, during online voice calls there are distractors, namely, bad internet connection, quality of sounds and video etcetera. During the Covid-19, our school changed the format of education to the
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due to
devices and occasional internet outages.
To conclude
, the availability of sensitive and physical interaction via face to
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face-to-face
face
interactions outweighs the opportunity to talk with overseas friends.Submitted by aibiikenurlanova414 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...