The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

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The table compares the changes

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individuals who travelled to other countries in 1990,1995,2000 and 2005.

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Europe was the most favourite place during the time period,

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the Middle East countries got the lowest attraction of travellers.

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, the number of people who travelled

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increased considerably in all four years.

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with,In 1990 ,448.9 million people travelled to other countries

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people, about 280.2 million.

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Topic Vocabulary:

significant increase
international travel
popular destinations
economic growth
technological advancements
ease of travel
cultural exchange
globalization
fluctuations
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millions of travelers
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The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

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