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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will one day replace face-to-face education. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience. Write at least 250 words.

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In a world, where we spend a significant amount of time on the Internet, online
education
 experiences a strong increase in popularity.
While
 some people expect that e-learning could take the place of face-to-face
education
, I agree with the proponents of
this
 view that it cannot be a substitute for traditional
education
. The popularity of
online-
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education
 results from their flexible and easy access
,.
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 Youtube, Instagram and other distinct features are the main
reason
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 why a significant amount of
primarily
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young people have a habituation in these and exhibit strong digital skills.
Therefore
, it is relatively easy for them to acquire new abilities through online
education
.
Furthermore
, online courses could be accessed without assembling
on
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 a significant location and
due to
 video recording possibilities a pre-defined schedule is not mandatory.
Hence
, students could organise their
education
 individually.
While
, from the advocates’ perspective,
this
new
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 gained flexibility is beneficial for acquiring abilities, I agree with the proponents that for
a
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 extensive
education
 discussing the study content face-to-face in groups is another fundamental aspect. For expanding your knowledge, repeating and reflecting
the
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 subject from several perspectives are key factors for success.
Hence
, in
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 to online
education
, the traditional educational approach
offer
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 students a group to discuss and reflect
the
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 subject together.
Due to
 the
flexibly
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 and
anonymously
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 way of learning, online
education
 is limited in providing discussion possibilities for its pupils. In conclusion,
whereas
 many see online
education
 as a new approach
for
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 our
education
 system, I agree with those who evaluate the traditional way of learning as irreplaceable. It is clearly important to consider the value of face-to-face discussions and reflections for successfully acquiring new abilities and skills
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