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In today’s fast-paced world, many individuals struggle with delaying or postponing tasks. Give a cause and an effective solution for this.

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Many
people
 nowadays struggle with delaying or postponing chores In today's fast-paced society. The main cause of
this
 is task aversion. Yet it can be
adressed
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addressed
 by separating the
tasks
 they get. The
pricipal
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principal
 cause of
this
 serious problem is
due to
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the
unpleasant
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 of some
tasks
 which
people
 get
frome
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from
work
.
That is
 to
are
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recieved
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receive
 some challenging
tasks
, they take often say when
people
 prioritize as well asities part in
another activities
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another activity
other activities
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 like suffering the internet or taking a chat with
friend
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a friend
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 to replenish their positive status.
as well as
people
 unconsciously evade and do not want to concentrate on their works that
people
 get from
boss
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.
As a result
,
people
 will pay attention to activities and procrastinate in completing the necessary
work
.
This
 is true, in school day life nowadays, most
of
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students tend to get distracted from enjoyable activities whenever they feel unendureable in. ir
work
 and student do not finish homework.
However
, a solution can be found in breaking it into smaller fragments. To explain
further
 when
people
 arrange
task
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to
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 small parts and solve slowly on each one,
people
 will definitely finish their
task
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tasks
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 easily.
As a result
. if
people
 separate
work
 into more manageable steps
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as well
 as
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 with
tasks
 they like,
people
 •No realize that
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productive
 time will be shorted.
For
this
 reason,
people
 know how to
work
 in a stable and reasonable manner
as well as
 see the entire
project
 clearly. Take students as an example, well- students at school usually begin with
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those
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those
tasks
 to make them more tolerable and by the time the
project
 is clone without
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tedious
 In conclusion, the problem of procrastination stems from the fact that
people
,
averse
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 to
work
.
Nevertheless
, dividing the
project
 into smaller ones will make
people
 easier to complete the
project
.
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  • procrastination
  • motivation
  • clear goals
  • rewarding system
  • overwhelm
  • fear of failure
  • manageable parts
  • support
  • time management skills
  • prioritize
  • distractions
  • technology
  • social media
  • digital detox
  • structured work environment
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