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The pictures show the steps involved in making coffee products.

The pictures show the steps involved in making
coffee
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products
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. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, there are 8 steps in the process, beginning with harvesting, and ending with purchasing
of
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coffee
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products
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.
The first
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step
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 is that
coffee
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 beans are harvested by farmers once per year. After that, they are transported for processing which completes test success. It is for collecting plants which are good for processing. The second
step
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 is that they are dried in the sun between 24 and 72 hours. In the following
step
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, dried plants are hulled by special machines. In the subsequent stage, they are roasted between 10 and 20 minutes. After that, the plants are packed in paper or plastic bags (It depends on the produced things), and they are
then
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 delivered to the supermarket for sale. The
last
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step
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 is that it is ready for purchase of
coffee
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products
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. You can buy these
coffee
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products
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 from the supermarket.

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