You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

Dear John,
Although
it's been a short time
we
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since we
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met each other, I feel much longer. I am glad to know that you are doing well. Despite with busy work schedule, we moved to
new
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house
in
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last
Monday. It is a 3 BHK
river frontage
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riverfront
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home
with a beautiful garden and a spacious backyard. I have renovated the kitchen with
contemporary
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a contemporary
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modular type. New accommodation is just one kilometer away
form
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from
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the town, There is a bus stop
is
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just 100
meter
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away from the
home
, so it is very accessible at any time. Supermarket and restaurant within one kilometer which
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convenient for me. You should have visited
over
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my
home
.
Dont
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Don't
worry about the
accomoodation
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accommodation
we have plenty of space in my
home
. I will bake strawberry tart, your favourite, though I am a disaster in the kitchen. I am eagerly waiting for your arrival. With warm regards, Jennifer
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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