THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.
The bar chart represents the data on hot drink
consuming
and purchasing habits of five Replace the word
consumption
city
in Australia Change to a plural noun
cities
that is
collected by a survey. Linking Words
According to
Linking Words
results
, the proportion of people Correct article usage
the results
went
to a Correct pronoun usage
who went
coffee
shop Use synonyms
for drinking
Change preposition
to drink
coffee
or tea Use synonyms
with in
4 Correct your spelling
within
weeks
is the highest in all cities, Use synonyms
expect
in Adelaide. Correct your spelling
except
Moreover
, the ratio of bought instant Linking Words
coffee
exhibits relatively higher proportions than the percentages of fresh Use synonyms
coffee
purchasing Use synonyms
habit
in Fix the agreement mistake
habits
Linking Words
last
4 Correct article usage
the last
weeks
.
The three major Use synonyms
coffee
and Use synonyms
tea consuming
cities in terms of the survey results are Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart, with approximately 60% of the population Add a hyphen
tea-consuming
consumed
their beverages at Wrong verb form
consuming
coffee
Use synonyms
shop
in the period of 4 Fix the agreement mistake
shops
weeks
. Use synonyms
While
in Sydney and Melbourne around 40% to 50% of the population bought instant or fresh Linking Words
coffee
throughout the period, the difference Use synonyms
of
these ratios Change preposition
in
are
more than 10% with instant Change the verb form
is
coffee
dominance in Hobart.
The remaining two countries demonstrate slightly lower proportions of consumption, specifically for the fresh Use synonyms
coffee
buying habit with nearly 30%. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Adelaide has the Linking Words
least
Correct word choice
lowest
percentages
Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
for go
to a cafe Change preposition
of going
for consuming
Change preposition
to consume
coffee
or tea in the Use synonyms
last
4 Linking Words
weeks
, with just below 40%.Use synonyms
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