THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.
The bar chart represents the data on hot drink
consuming
and purchasing habits of five Replace the word
consumption
city
in Australia Change to a plural noun
cities
that is
collected by a survey. According to
results
, the proportion of people Correct article usage
the results
went
to a Correct pronoun usage
who went
coffee
shop for drinking
Change preposition
to drink
coffee
or tea with in
4 Correct your spelling
within
weeks
is the highest in all cities, expect
in Adelaide. Correct your spelling
except
Moreover
, the ratio of bought instant coffee
exhibits relatively higher proportions than the percentages of fresh coffee
purchasing habit
in Fix the agreement mistake
habits
last
4 Correct article usage
the last
weeks
.
The three major coffee
and tea consuming
cities in terms of the survey results are Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart, with approximately 60% of the population Add a hyphen
tea-consuming
consumed
their beverages at Wrong verb form
consuming
coffee
shop
in the period of 4 Fix the agreement mistake
shops
weeks
. While
in Sydney and Melbourne around 40% to 50% of the population bought instant or fresh coffee
throughout the period, the difference of
these ratios Change preposition
in
are
more than 10% with instant Change the verb form
is
coffee
dominance in Hobart.
The remaining two countries demonstrate slightly lower proportions of consumption, specifically for the fresh coffee
buying habit with nearly 30%. Furthermore
, Adelaide has the least
Correct word choice
lowest
percentages
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percentage
for go
to a cafe Change preposition
of going
for consuming
Change preposition
to consume
coffee
or tea in the last
4 weeks
, with just below 40%.Submitted by historicalpen on
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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