The charts below show the changes in ownweshio of electrical aooliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownweshio of electrical aooliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The line graphs illustrate the volume of households with electrical appliances and the number of hours of housework per week, per household in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, the
ownership
of electrical appliances increased between 1920 and 2019
while
, the amount of time spent doing housework and households throughout the period.
To begin
with, in 1920 washing machines,
refrigerators
and vacuum
cleaner
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were approximately at 2%, 30% and 40% respectively,
Then
, the
ownership
of
refrigerators
and vacuum
cleaner
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increased rapidly and the amount of
ownership
of
refrigerators
and the
ownership
for
refrigerators
crossed over the vacuum cleaner at late 1930.
However
, after 2000, usage of bath appliances remained stable at peak.
Moreover
, the percentage of usage for
refrigerator
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grew up
till
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1960 at 70% and dropped to nearly 62% in 1980. After that, again slightly climbed up 72% in 2019. Comparatively, the amount of time spent doing housework and households dramatically declined between 1920 to 2019.
Further
, in 1920, the number of hours per week started at 50 and it significantly went down to 20 in 1960.
Then
, virtually reduced the hours per week to 10
at the end
of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ownership, refrigerators with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • appliances
  • household
  • reduction
  • efficiency
  • technological advancements
  • convenience
  • socio-economic factors
  • urbanization
  • disposable income
  • gender roles
  • environmental impact
  • sustainability
  • energy consumption
  • time allocation
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