'Failure is proof that desire wasn't strong enough'. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In

this

contemporary era, numerous individuals are highly ambitious and have the tendency to get what they want

however

, it is argued that lack of passion is the prime reason to fail. I completely disagree with

this

notion because several factors contribute to gaining control over things.

To begin

with,

Although

strong willpower is the greatest key to success, many men and women tend to fail in several phases of their

life

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. It is often the case that socio-economic conditions and

deprive

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of family support deter creatures like humans from chasing their

dream

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dreams

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, putting them in a miserable situation where they can no longer have the ability to achieve their goals.

For example

, A lower class from Jumla, Nepal wanted to become a pilot and had a strong desire to attain her dream but,

due to

poverty, she couldn't

fulfill

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her dream.

Thus

, evidence explicitly shows that hundreds of thousands of

people

across

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Asia are taken aback

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their big dreams because of financial instabilities.

Moreover

, inevitable situations hinder

people

from accomplishing their desired state of goals. In fact,

people

actually amount to what they want to obtain in

life

and regardless of continuous effort and discipline, they encounter multifarious obstacles in their lives which

causes

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constant failure.

For instance

, serious health

issue

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like depression, stroke and

accident

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accidents

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restrains

people

from victory or seamlessly sticking to their goals. Another instance,

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my recently assigned patient in the hospital who had a sudden brain injury, was highly ambitious and confident in his

life

so,

although

his critical medical condition refrained him from going abroad for

further

studies even though he had a granted visa.

Hence

, a piece of real evidence shows that

people

did not get to smoothly chase after their dreams even if they wanted to.

To conclude

,

people

are often evaluated on whether they have strong willpower, and winning and losing are not solely measured by his or her level of passion I firmly believe that , it is mainly the socioeconomic status and inevitable circumstances in

life

.