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For instance, AI ( intelligence artificial) one of the many arguments that the universities are studying, in the future can resolve many problems, especially in complex fields and this could improve the people to take decisions

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Nowadays, many scientists or engineers through the
science
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of
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things, especially in fields
such
 as physics or biology.
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 is very important not only for them but for all
people
 who love these subjects because the purpose of
science
should
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 improve
people
’s lives. In
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science
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 a lot of things
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 not exist today because the scientist with their complex formula can
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the
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reality.
Furthermore
, if we achieve to cure
people
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cancer or
others
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 diseases, we must say thank you to technology and researchers.
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examples that I can do but I want to push
people
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science
 because one day we will need
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. The
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 done
last
 year
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as
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science
 can have a huge impact on
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people
 just
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to
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transports
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 or the
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 of technologies.
For instance
, AI ( intelligence artificial) one of the many arguments that
the
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universities are studying, in the future can resolve many problems, especially in complex fields and
this
 could improve the
people
 to
take
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 decisions.
To sum up
, I believe that
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science
 not only
resolve
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 problems but can be very useful to improve yourself because
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culture
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 very important to achieve great results. I hope that in the future, governments should invest more money to improve the system and
creates
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 new places of
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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