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In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

#today’s #world #science #technology #value #artists #musicians #painters #writers #art #life
Nowadays, it seems that computers can answer all the questions that we have
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give
diagnosis
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 or name the best ways to cope with one's loss or other mental
illnesses
.
However
, computers or scientific research do not have the capacity to convey the most beautiful and horrible moments in life. In my belief
scientist
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scientists
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 lack some aspects and in
this
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 I will cover the examples of life that
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science cannot explain.
First,
the research papers could have a problem with explaining the struggles and effects of
illnesses
,
for example
, dementia or
Alzhiemers
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Alzheimer
 disease. Art, on the
over
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other
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 hand, greatly tells about it. Many artists
had
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 been victims of these diseases, which can be clearly identified in their paintings and their writing.
For instance
, patients
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 dementia start to paint deformed faces and in the long
run
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 they
do not
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 even
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be recognised as faces. For the
viewers
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 it helps to see the patterns of
illnesses
 in their loved ones and be more compassionate with
such
 individuals.
Furthermore
, scientists lack perspective and usually write about only persons’ experiences and symptoms, which usually are categorized and do not differ
person
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 to person. Forms of art, like, dancing and paintings are great in that. Painters use
colors
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, light and stopped moments to show how sadness, love or
ones’
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 loss feels
like
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.
And dancing
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also
 has a great way of showing emotion from
movement
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movements
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facial
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and facial
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 expressions. In conclusion, scientists are great in explaining processes of
illnesses
 that are happening in our body, but not so great in painting
real
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 picture of those diseases of how
it
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affects
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 others or how
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 can be recognised. They
also
 have a hard time conveying emotion.
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