In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

Nowadays, it seems that computers can answer all the questions that we have

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give

diagnosis

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or name the best ways to cope with one's loss or other mental

illnesses

.

However

, computers or scientific research do not have the capacity to convey the most beautiful and horrible moments in life. In my belief

scientist

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lack some aspects and in

this

essay

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I will cover the examples of life that

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science cannot explain.

First,

the research papers could have a problem with explaining the struggles and effects of

illnesses

,

for example

, dementia or

Alzhiemers

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Alzheimer

disease. Art, on the

over

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hand, greatly tells about it. Many artists

had

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been victims of these diseases, which can be clearly identified in their paintings and their writing.

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, patients

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dementia start to paint deformed faces and in the long

run

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they

do not

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even

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be recognised as faces. For the

viewers

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viewers,

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it helps to see the patterns of

illnesses

in their loved ones and be more compassionate with

such

individuals.

Furthermore

, scientists lack perspective and usually write about only persons’ experiences and symptoms, which usually are categorized and do not differ

person

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to person. Forms of art, like, dancing and paintings are great in that. Painters use

colors

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, light and stopped moments to show how sadness, love or

ones’

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loss feels

like

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.

And dancing

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also

has a great way of showing emotion from

movement

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movements

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facial

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and facial

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expressions. In conclusion, scientists are great in explaining processes of

illnesses

that are happening in our body, but not so great in painting

real

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picture of those diseases of how

it

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affects

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others or how

it

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can be recognised. They

also

have a hard time conveying emotion.