The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre.

The map shows how Islip

town

centre

now

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and the proposed redevelopment plan.

Overall

, the layout of the plan shows how the

road

path will be built around the

town

for better traffic flow.

In addition

, convenience for vehicles will be added

such

as

car

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park and bus station. New housing for residents will

also

take place in most parts of the area. The main

road

from the current map is located in the middle, which serves the west and east

side

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of the

town

.

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in the proposed layout, the main

road

will only be used by pedestrians and a dual carriageway

road

that goes around the

town

will be available from west to east. Looking at the north side of the remained shops, a bigger shopping centre will replace the array of shops before. For shopping convenience, a bus station and car parks on both sides of the shopping centre.

Moreover

,

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the northern east and southern

area

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of the remained shops, previous houses were relocated to make room for more residential facilities.

As a result

, the park has visibly minimised in size

due to

houses and

road

path

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.