you have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neghboorur. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: Introduce yourself Describe your plans for the party Invite your neighbor to come

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Dear Mr. Warner, I am writing to inform you about my plan to organise a celebration in your neighbourhood where I moved a couple of weeks ago. I thought to let my neighbour know about

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party first because the loudness of the music may trouble you

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Friday evening. First of all, my name is Mr Ravindra Rajole and I am your new neighbour living at house number 16/3, Park Street. We purchased

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house from Mr. Smith

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month. To celebrate our new home, we are hosting a party with our family and friends.

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the event will start around 7 p.m., we are not sure about the end of

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, there will be songs, barbeque and lights in the backyard of our residence. Mrs Warner already has some idea about the event, I thought to let you know though.

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, it would be great if you join our celebration with your family. We will be more happy to see our neighbours enjoying with us.

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, I am hoping that noise in the late night will not bother you so much. I look forward to meeting you on Friday. Yours sincerely, Ravindra Rajole

ravirajoleTue Oct 17 2023

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph contains a single main idea.

coherence cohesion

Include a clear introduction and conclusion in your letter.

task achievement

Provide more details about the party arrangements.

task achievement

Offer a solution or compromise regarding the potential noise disturbance to address the neighbor's concern.

task achievement

Use a more formal and polite tone throughout the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

196 words

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