The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 avout one university. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 avout one university.

Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about aspects of the university.
Overall
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, students had given the lowest
point
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in technical quality,
print
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resources
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, and electric
resources
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in 2000,
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however
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however,
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the rest of
years
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the years
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they
have shown
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good points.
On the contrary
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, the
range
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of
modules
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offered has shown a decrease mark. In terms of rating, the
range
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of
modules
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offered had the lowest
point
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at 32 in 2000,
however
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, the
print
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resources
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have shown the highest
point
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at 87 in the same
year
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. The same thing happened in 2005, the
range
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of
modules
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offered again showed the lowest
point
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at 30, and
print
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resources
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have shown
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showed
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a peak mark. The technical quality has been given an
overall
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score of approximately 66 every
year
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. In the
last
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year
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, the
print
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resources
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and the electric
resources
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have shown an apex score of 88 and the
print
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resources
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have the best rate every
year
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. The
range
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of new
modules
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anew
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has a minimum rate. Building or teaching facilities have shown stable scores.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words point, print, resources, range, modules, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • teaching quality
  • facilities
  • student satisfaction
  • support services
  • trends
  • ratings
  • infrastructure
  • utilization rates
  • feedback
  • university policies
  • available services
  • evolution
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • analyzing
  • overview
  • discussing
  • exploring
  • examining
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