write a referral letter to the renal clinical nurse specialist at the bunbury community health centre
I am writing to refer
Mr
Daller Walter
who has undergone catheter insertion for CRF. He requires your continued care and education on his renal status. Now he is set to be discharged today.
Mr
Walter
was admitted to our care on16
June with worsening symptoms of renal failure for which he Correct your spelling
on 16
undergone
insertion of Add the auxiliary verb
underwent
has undergone
continuous
ambulatory peritoneal dialysis catheter for CRF. During hospitalization, he experienced Correct article usage
a continuous
Correct article usage
a slightly
slightly increased
in potassium level Replace the word
slight increase
and
is currently normal range. His hospital stay Correct word choice
but
prolonged
because of the slow Add a missing verb
was prolonged
learned
by Replace the word
learning
Mr
and Mrs Walter
about the management of his condition.
Mr
Walter
is a schizophrenic and has mild chronic delusions. However
,his mental status was stable.Currently , he is on disability
support pension. His wife, Correct article usage
a disability
the
primary carer of him. Add a missing verb
is the
But
, she has Correct word choice
However
mild
intellectual disability. He has a history of CRF for 4 years.He has had a history of diabetes which is managed by oral medication.
I would highly appreciate itAdd an article
a mild
,
if you could educate Remove the comma
apply
Mr
and Mrs walter
about the procedure including prevention of infection via catheter and signs of peritonitis. Kindly educate him about the Change the capitalization
Walter
important
Replace the word
importance
on
minimising Change preposition
of
k+
Change the capitalization
K+
on
his diet. Kindly monitor him for any signs of Change preposition
in
increase
psychosis and seek Replace the word
increased
meadical
attention, if necessary .
If you have any queries ,don't hesitate to contact me.Correct your spelling
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