write a referral letter to the renal clinical nurse specialist at the bunbury community health centre

I am writing to refer
Mr
Daller
Walter
who has undergone catheter insertion for CRF. He requires your continued care and education on his renal status. Now he is set to be discharged today.
Mr
Walter
was admitted to our care
on16
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on 16
June with worsening symptoms of renal failure for which he
undergone
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underwent
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insertion of
continuous
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a continuous
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ambulatory peritoneal dialysis catheter for CRF. During hospitalization, he experienced
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a slightly
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slightly increased
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slight increase
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in potassium level
and
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but
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is currently normal range. His hospital stay
prolonged
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because of the slow
learned
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by
Mr
and Mrs
Walter
about the management of his condition.
Mr
Walter
is a schizophrenic and has mild chronic delusions.
However
,his mental status was stable.Currently , he is on
disability
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support pension. His wife,
the
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primary carer of him.
But
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, she has
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intellectual disability. He has a history of CRF for 4 years.He has had a history of diabetes which is managed by oral medication. I would highly appreciate it
,
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if you could educate
Mr
and Mrs
walter
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Walter
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about the procedure including prevention of infection via catheter and signs of peritonitis. Kindly educate him about the
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on
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of
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minimising
k+
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on
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in
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his diet. Kindly monitor him for any signs of
increase
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psychosis and seek
meadical
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medical
attention, if necessary . If you have any queries ,don't hesitate to contact me.
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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

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  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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