An old car was left on the street near your street several weeks ago. The car is now causing a problem for residents. Write a letter to the Council. In your letter: * Describe the car * Outline the problems it is causing * Tell the Council what you want them to do about it

Dear Sir, I'm writing
this
letter to bring your attention towards an old
car
that someone has left in our street, and it is posing difficulties for the neighbourhood. I'm living at 28 - Model Town Street, Scarborough.
Last
Sunday, on the right corner of the Steeles and Tenth Line intersection of the street, we found an old
car
. It is a Honda Civic of black
color
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having plate number ON3452. Two tires are punctured, and the front mirror is
also
broken. We have asked in our neighbourhood, the
car
belongs to nobody in
this
residential area. The person who would be the owner of
this
car
parked the
car
in the wrong location. So, whenever, we have to pass our own vehicle, it would be difficult for us to look at the other side of the road to ensure a safe ride.
Last
night, an old woman in our location was very near to being hit by a
car
. Fortunately, one of the people from the other side of the road blew the horn to bring to attention
this
matter,
otherwise
, an accident
can happen
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yesterday. As
this
vehicle does not belong to any of us in the locality, I request you on behalf of my whole neighbourhood to remove
this
vehicle from
this
place as soon as possible. Looking forward for a prompt action. Yours faithfully, Lisha Lokai
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Ensure your letter has a clear introduction, body paragraphs that adhere to a single idea each, and a conclusive ending. Consider creating more distinct paragraphs to enhance clarity and organization.
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Stay focused on the task's objectives throughout your writing. This includes addressing all bullet points with sufficient detail. Providing specifics about the vehicle and the problems it's causing, as well as a clear request to the Council, demonstrates strong task achievement.

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