The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
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This
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map shows the changes in the layout of the Public Library at two different times, two decades ago and today.
Overall
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, many new facilities have been added to the Central Library. It is worth noting that the
place
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at the north-west corner of the map has been enlarged and the foyer has been extended by removing tables and chairs. A closer look at the map reveals that an
area
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for CDs, videos and computer games has become a
place
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with 2 sofas to provide comfort during storytelling sessions and children's books.
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, a
place
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where children's books were stored has become a lecture
area
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. Over the
last
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20 years, there has been a breakthrough in technology. A reading
area
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with newspapers and magazines has been replaced by a computer
place
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, and self-service machines have been placed between the lecture
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and a café.
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, adult fiction books and an information desk were placed next to the self-service machines. The information desk has
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been converted into a café.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words place, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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