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Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits, TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the globalization
world
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world,
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 many receive the same media and adopt a homogeneous culture in terms of entertainment, fashion and other areas as
such
.
However
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 there are some
people
 who believe that it will lose the identities of their culture and civilization.
This
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further
 both
the
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sides of
this
 phenomenon. The improvements in communication technologies have increased cultural and language interchange between
countries
.
For example
,
people
 easily receive a trend
of
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 fashion, devices, lifestyle and languages from foreign
countries
 and follow them
especially
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for
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the young generation.
Thus
,
people
 wear the same clothes, use the same devices, eat the same food, listen to the same music, watch the same movies and speak the same language. It is a good phenomenon in some aspects
such
 as it is not difficult to help each other to develop the world to be
more
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 civilized place and to be friends with foreign
people
 without boundaries.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages of globalization,
such
 as the loss of traditional customs which have begun to melt with foreign ones and will later disappear.
Therefore
, many
countries
 are going to lose their identity
such
 as traditional clothes, manners and ethics.
Additionally
,
people
 are not as healthy as they were in the past because they always eat unhealthy food
according to
 the trends of modern society and advertisements.
To conclude
,
Although
 many are worrying about
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 their identity, I agree that the advantages of
this
 phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages.
However
, we need to preserve the cultural identity and protect our
countries
 from the deterioration of the good merits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural globalization
  • Cultural exchange
  • Cross-cultural communication
  • Assimilation
  • Homogenization
  • Acculturation
  • Traditional customs
  • Local economies
  • Diversity
  • Inclusion
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