In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without playing. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Online reading will
be replace
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newspapers
or
books
in the future. Because nobody wanted to spend the money to buy them. In my own opinion, I agree with
this
statement and I will explain my point of view.
Firstly
, at present, we have a lot of technology that income to our world, for example, we have many mobile games to play on the internet without payment including reading passages or research
otherwise
cartoons everything free on the internet no need to pay like
newspapers
and
books
.
Secondly
,
read
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reading
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everything they want online can reduce their own expenses. Nowadays, money is
kind
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the kind
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of thing that you have to keep
it
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apply
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to do something else like buy some snacks or your own happiness it must be
important
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more important
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than buying print
newspapers
or
books
. That can be concluded that reading everything they want online will replace buying print
newspapers
or
books
because they don’t want to waste their own money if they have a better choice
that is
a reason why I agree with
this
statement.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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