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Some people say that adversiting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Two sides of people's discussion of advertising can
be persuade
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persuade
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customers to buy things taken from another viewpoint advertising can not if we are not paying attention to them. I will give you both of my views. The duty of advertising is
incline
Fix the infinitive
to incline
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 customer to buy their product
that
Correct word choice
because
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 they might have knowledge of psychology
for example
 in real-life situations if you go to some shop and they come to you to advert you to buy their product, it must be pressure if you
along with
 them together for a long time that can make you buy their product,
Thus
 it can conclude that they are extremely successful to persuading us to buy a thing.
On the other hand
, you can ignore them if the thing that advertising inclines isn’t your cup of tea. You can reject them and walk away.
For example
, you have to go to buy some vegetables but at the same time you find some advertising about snacks and it looks delicious
nevertheless
, you don’t have enough money
then
 you have to no longer pay attention to it and buy vegetable as fast as you can it can save your money and pay for you truly want to buy.
Conclude
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In conclusion
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, there are both sides of opinion about
this
 statement at the first that advertising is very successful in persuading us to buy things and the second one, no longer paying attention is another way to save your own money and keep it to pay for something you really need.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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