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The chart below present information about electricity generated using renewable and non renewable engergy in the United states in 2009 and 2019.

The chart below present information about electricity generated using renewable and non renewable engergy in the United states in 2009 and 2019.
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The graph represents the
electricity
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 generated using renewable and
non renewable
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non-renewable
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energy
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 in the United
states
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 in the
year
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 2009-2019.
Overall
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,
the
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coal and natural gas produced high
electricity
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non renewable
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non-renewable
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energy
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source
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sources
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.
Hydro electric
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Hydroelectric
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 and wind produce more
energy
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 compared to
others
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other
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 in renewable
engery
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energy
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source
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sources
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. In detail, petroleum
produce
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produces
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 57
billion
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 of
electricity
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 in the
year
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 2009 and less in the
year
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 2019. Solar
produce
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 73
billion
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kilowatt
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kilowatts
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 per
hour
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 in 2019
whereas
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, it is producing
less
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fewer kilowatts
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kilowatt
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 than wind
energy
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.
Geotheormal
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Geothermal
 is the
least producing
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least-producing
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 renewable
energy
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source
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 compared to others. Coal
produces
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produced
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 a large number
energy
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 in 2009
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but
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where
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but
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 it
produces
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produced
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apply
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a
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less in 2019. In brief,
the
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plant and animal matter generate about 54-58
billion
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kilowatt
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kilowatts
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 of
energy
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 in
the
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both
the
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years.There is no big difference
in
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between
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 them. Natural gas
produce
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produced
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 921
billion
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kilowatt
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kilowatts
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 per
hour
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 in 2009 which
generate
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generated
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 less than 2019 is 1582
billion
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kilowatt
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kilowatts
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 per
hour
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. In renewable
energ
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energy
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source
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sources
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 hydroelectric
yield
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yielded
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same
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the same
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billion
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kilowatt
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kilowatts
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 per
hours
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hour
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 during the
year
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 from 2009-2019. US
electricity
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is
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generated from renewable is 437
billion
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kilowatt
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 in the
year
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 2009 and 720
billion
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kilowatt
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 per
hour
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 in
theyear
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the year
year
 2019. There is a difference in generating the
electricity
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 from the
year
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 between ten years (2009-2019).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, energy, year, source, billion, kilowatt, hour with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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