the graph and chart below give information about species extinctions and the threats to plant life.

the graph and chart below give information about species extinctions and the threats to plant life.
The line chart provides information about the
species
of plants and animals that are extinct in the tropical forest. Whilst, the pie chart gives data about the different threats to
plant
life.
Although
the
species
that no longer existed rose significantly until 2060, the trend after that tended to decline remarkably.
In addition
, human intervention poses a more serious threat compared to those caused by nature. As presented in the first graph, the data of
plant
and animal extinctions from 2000 are increasing sharply, and are projected to continue to soar until the dying out
species
levels will peak in 2060 with figures reaching 50,000 extinctions per million
species
.
Furthermore
, after the
species
in the tropical forests hit the highest point they are noticeably reduced to under 30,000 extinctions per million
species
by the end of
this
century. Turning to the second chart, there are two causes threatening
plant
life (human impact and natural events) and it can be seen that the risks to
plant
life are mostly from humans, with the proportion
for
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slightly over
four fifths
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. There are three major factors which are causing
this
problem : agriculture with the largest ratio
18.7
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percent, harvesting (14.4%), and development with the smaller amount of 10.4 percent.
By contrast
, natural events,
such
as natural disasters and other natural events have a quite smaller effect on the lives of the plants, with the proportion for almost a fifth.
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