The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about
a
number of US citizens who consumed fast food between 2003 and 2013.
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the
Overall
, everyday indicators and never indicators illustrate similar popularity, less than 5%. By comparison
, Once a week
and once-or twice-a-month illustrations showed more fluctuation but held the top spot.
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Once-a-week
According to
the data, once a week and once or twice a month illustrations indicate that approximately one of the three USA residents spend their time like this
. However
a few times a year indicator
showed that stability about 15 per cent of people voted Fix the agreement mistake
indicators
this
option. To the surprise, several times a week indicator variation between 15% and 20%. Every day and never consumption categories were without any significant changes and illustrate a tiny minority vote about 3% and 5%.Change preposition
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