You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before write a letter to the accommodation officer. in your letter - give details of your course and arrival/ departure date - explain your accommodation needs - ask for information about getting to from the college
Dear Sara,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my course
in your college. As you know, I have never been travelling abroad.
I would be grateful if you would to assistance to me, the course
has been starting on the 7th of March to 9th the of next month, also
I will come on the 6th. My course
will be talking about (HR) Human Resources is pretty beneficial for employees, however
, the manager’s course
will teach us how we can be convenient in the work society.
As you know, I do not have any information about your city such
as accommodation and transportation, If you do not mind helping me to find a closer hotel that has a security system because of my reference documents, I prefer to live alone in a private room.
Let me ask you about the transportation’s city which is a crucial thing in this
period some traffic jams hinder movement and I must be in college early I intend to book a driver’s car.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
MonirahSubmitted by M on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains one main idea and that all sentences within it are cohesive, supporting that idea.
Task Achievement
Maintain a consistent formal tone throughout the letter without using informal language such as 'pretty beneficial'.
Coherence and Cohesion
Provide a structure that includes an introduction, body paragraphs for each bullet point, and a conclusion to improve logical estructure.
Task Achievement
Avoid typographical and grammatical mistakes such as 'would to assistance to me' which should be 'would assist me' to ensure clarity.